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Thread for those who like to read and write including fanfiction. Share drafts, look for beta-readers, ask for writing advice, give recommendations and do all that other cool jazz. Just remember to not bully anyone else no matter how shit their taste might be.


Better have a writing general instead. I'm sure there's a lot of backed-up utopian SF writers here.


We can share fanfiction here too right?
Making this a general Writing thread (including fanfiction) would be based


Sure, feel free to share any fics that you like or have written yourself.
I'd prefer to have general fiction and fanfiction as separate honestly because I personally read more of the latter than former. Also, this thread is not supposed to be exclusively about writing so making it the thread's sole topic would exclude anyone who just likes to read and discuss about shit they've read and have never written anything themselves.


Lily and the Art of Being Sisyphus https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9911469/1/Lily-and-the-Art-of-Being-Sisyphus

>a cosmic horror-comedy about a female version of Harry Potter and her wacky adventures with the Voldemort soul copy in her brain who she nicknames Wizard Lenin (another copy who she names "Wizard Trotsky" for his annoying behavior also appears).

We should just have a writing thread that also talks about fanfic. Amateur art made by outsiders has always been a part of proletariat culture even when it's not judged as "good taste" by the bourgeoisie.


>Short rant
… and fucking Carnivorous Muffin pursues me even to this site. For a numerous set of reasons I detest their work. Primarily my dislike is due to it being an inane Mary Sue isekai Crack fic filled with OCs and OOC characters stretched way too fucking far and plagueing multiple fandoms and fanfiction sites due to the numerous crossovers.
Inb4 "muh absurdism"
Absurdism is esoteric as fuck for 1 thing, not to mention that it becomes very tiresome. The stories don't have definite beginnings or endings and at the end of the day I have this thought… why bother reading this. The main character is a fucking god among men breaking every law of magic or whatever universe they're in. It's boring because the point is lacking
>Wizard Lenin and Trotsky
This is an example of my claimed Mary-Sueness because it is exactly like every other garbage paper-back isekai mary sue fic that I've had the misfortune of reading; having some imaginary/special voice/friend/companion who talks and provides "le banter".

Rant over


I meant making this a writing thread because people make some fanfic-like works that are technically original works, like the write-fag on /leftyweebpol/ who I betaed for this Isekai attempt (which is now dead because fuck knows why).


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>Harry Potter
>Slash pairing because like most fanfiction it is written by a horny women
>Author Notes at the end of virtually every chapter in case it wasn't clear yet that the author was a narcissist
>60+ chapters and 400k words because the story has no plot, no structure, and just meanders along aimlessly
>Published in 2013 and still ongoing to this very day

Gee it's almost like the accusation that fanfiction writers wouldn't cut it as real writers is true!


Ahem… comrade.
I am that writefag.
I just haven't made much progress because I'm still looking for a solution to the language barrier problem without inventing a whole new fictional language from scratch. I can't really write the MC interacting with the natives if I don't have an idea on how they will or won't be able to communicate.
Also, nice to see you again Editor-san.
This is the reason I don't read Harry Potter fanfiction. Or the original Harry Potter for that matter.


Ah hello there, Long time no see. Have you any new chapters besides your issues?
>I can't really write the MC interacting with the natives if I don't have an idea on how they will or won't be able to communicate.
Take a leaf out of some of the Naruto x RWBY crossovers or the Naruto x Harry Potter crossovers The writers who watched the Subs often address this issue by
A) Using magic means like a translator spell or mind-transfer trick
or B) Having the protagonist learn through symbol - word learning.

>the original Harry Potter

Eh, its a fun casual read, just nothing to take super-seriously outside a fantasy setting. Ikotika (a Russian youtuber) did a really fun review series of the movies parallel to the books where he expands on a lot of the interesting parts of Harry Potter as well as the problems and also some areas that extend into fanfiction.
>the reason I don't read Harry Potter fanfiction
I rarely do so Hagrid x Dobby still scars me to this day However I will sometimes come across wonderful gems among the grime.

>fanfiction writers wouldn't cut it as real writers is true!
Fanfiction for the large part is people appreciating a work of media, having an idea and trying to write it out. Few people have the ability to do so, but those who do produce some splendid additions, sometimes better than the original work.
Other people just use it to release ideas based on media they consume so as to pass the time and let their thoughts out in a healthy manner, like NeonZangetsu.


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>Ah hello there, Long time no see. Have you any new chapters besides your issues?
Long time no see indeed. I had wondered for a while if you actually made it through the transition here, now glad to know you did.
Regarding issues? Well, let's just say that I haven't been writing anything new for almost a year now or done any concept-work for that matter. I've kinda just been busy practicing my drawing skills for my current field ever since I gave up on engineering. I recently became interested in continuing on the world-building aspects of the new world so I decided to start re-working the world map for it.
>A) Using magic means like a translator spell or mind-transfer trick
This feels like a bit of a cop-out imo that Isekai stories which don't just skip over the whole language barrier issue altogether tend to use. I'd prefer not to have to go this route but unless I find no other way I'm kind of forced to so the plot can progress. I think that language is kind of a largely unexplored plotpoint in a lot of isekai because everything can usually just be solved by magic. Since complex magic (such as translating an entire language) is supposed to be rarer in my setting though I feel like I shouldn't just immediately jump the gun on this one and give him the ability to speak the common languages of the land from the get-go.
>or B) Having the protagonist learn through symbol - word learning.
Do you mean like having someone teach him? Cause that's gonna require him to find someone whose willing to do so first. Still probably the most plausible option though. I designed him a traveling partner in the form of a mutant a while back when I was still actively doing illustrations for the story. I could probably re-do him as well now that I've improved my drawing skills somewhat.


One book totally focused on weird language barriers is China Mieville's Embassytown. It's about a species that evolved language rather than developing it. Their speech is inextricable from thought, and has evolved certain natural failsafes including very strict criteria for identifying speakers (the protagonist can make the sounds but they don't even consider her sentient) and the inability to fabricate or tell lies. They have cultural workarounds for this, like staging poignant events so that they can be "referred to" as similes, but they're still basically incompatible with humans.


Am I glad that I'm not the only one who heavily dislikes that garbage


>"Gamer" fics?
Depends on what kind. The Gamer fics that have You/Main Character play a life until you "die" and then play again have always been garbage in my experienced opinion due to how lightly it treats death. It's why Log Horizon is boring as fuck.
Gaming fics that have mechanics like SAO (where you can access a menu screen but death is permanent and real) can work but take a lot of skilled writing to pull off, which is almost never, especially considering that SAO's author fails to write out the concept properly.
>MC is transferred into the body of his Skyrim character before then being further transported to Highschool DxD, hilarity ensues
Screams edgy from the first paragraphs and only gets worse. Its "le overpowered discount SI Original Character who enters a media and gets it all. What's the point of liking an anime (for example) if you don't care about or dislike the main character.
>MC is given his own custom-built multiverse as an apology
FFS that's just In Another World With My Smartphone
>Crossover with RWBY and DC
I'm noping out on that, DC is such a mess that I can't stand most of those fanfics.

TL;DR: Self-Incert and OC-centric fics are usually hard to pull off. Gamer fics are even harder. The tendency for Gamer fics to combine with OC/SI means that out of the thousands of fanfics out there, only a few are worth a damn outside of toilet reading.


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I'm genuinely surprised Mairimashita! Iruma-kun and Murenase! Shiiton Gakuen lack their own fanfiction.net pages. AO3 has them but lack in written works… which is a shame since they're both fun, silly series.


Reposting an amalgamation about this ms

Lily's (femHarry) characterization - She's basically kinda messed up as a result of not being able to die and therefore not really getting why death is bad. Also comes off as a brat. A character with zero consideration for anyone else is unrelatable and irritating.
The other characters tend to be extensions of the setting and therefore are not people in the first place, i.e. the Dursleys. While the given example is not wholly unlike the Canon, it is moderated because the Dursleys are less than 5% of the Canon books.
All this mess is often called Main Character Syndrome. It's a bit of a solipsist idea that you exist and nobody else does. It is so prevalent in many different media (such as Isekai anime) that it has flanderized beyond tolerable measure. Moreover this is less likely intentional and more an unironic belief of the author given their blog posts about "life".


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Am I the only one sick of gay shipping? I swear it plagues every fandom to the point where anything remotely gay in any fanfic makes me stop reading. I wouldn't mind if it weren't so poorly done, over and over and over again… an interesting story being axed by sudden slash because the author got horny while writing. It's worst when they take something like close friendship between two friends and make it into disturbing cocklust, seriously, go beat off and then comeback to the keyboard, we don't need to read discount Twilight-tier gay fantasies.


>Am I the only one
No, Anon, you're not the only one.

But for real, that's why I abandoned my fan circle last time. They got so bad that they wouldn't even accept straight ("hetshit") or yuri ships. What's so damn wrong about wanting male friends to stay friends? I actually think it's cuter to explore such close friendships than butchering those characters for the sake of gay buttsex. The worst is when they force their shit yaoi "dynamics" (stereotypes) onto them, it's boring, cliche and annoying. Wouldn't be so bad if fujoshits didn't act like their gay headcanons are canon all the time and if you don't agree they'll spam you with that garbage (at least in my experience). It's like a cult.


As a gay dude:
On one hand it is annoying as it seems to be pushed mainly by women who fetishize gays in the same way a lot of straight dudes fetishize lesbians. As you mentioned they're often not realistic and poorly written, they also seem to promote the idea that two dudes can't be close without sexual tension (I guess you could call this toxic masculinity).

On the other hand I get a bit of schadenfreude watching straight dudes complain about shit that gays have to put up with all the time, 99% of romance in fiction is heterosexual, or on the internet 12 year old moe-loli garbage.


Can steampunk count as a form of fanfiction? I read a bit of it but I never encountered Marxist steampunk, or even just Marx in those books. Does this thing even exist? What do you think of this idea?


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Does it use story elements such as specific settings or characters already established by someone else in a separate work of media such as a video game, a book or a movie?
Its fanfiction.
Its just regular fiction
Steampunk like every kind of "punk" is a subgenre of retrofuturism which can be condensed and simplified into the question of "what did people of this particular time period think the future would be like?" For steampunk its the age of steam engines, dieselpunk is the late 19th and early 20th century when fossil-fuel-based combustion engines were first starting to be popular and even cyberpunk when it first popped up was the 70s and 80s equivalent of the former two (it has kind of gradually turned into its own thing over the years and these days its considered a sub-genre of scifi more than retrofuturism).


Actually let me rephrase that last sentence.
Its considered more a of sub-genre of dystopian fiction and sci-fi in general rather than retro-futurism specifically even though a lot of modern cyberpunk works still incorporate those old aesthetics of the past decades.


the first I had any understanding of homosexual relations was through fujoshit because I was into fandom and fanfic for so much of my adolescence. luckily I met and dated actual men who behave like human beings and not YA protagonists, so I've been thoroughly disabused. another factor in that was being friends with a fujoshi in high school who progressively descended into more and more obnoxious behavior, and when I came out as bi, she became ten times more obnoxious about shipping me with other guys. I think what disgusts me the most about fujoshit is that whole notion of "all men are secretly homos, all the fujoshi needs to do is aggressively ship and act like a stalker until they 'admit' their feelings" which ends up seeming like sexual harassment by proxy or something.


>99% of romance in fiction is heterosexual
Have you been on AO3? Mor than 50% of Any fiction there, fanfiction or original fiction is tagged with M/M and even more gets missed with miscellaneous Yaoi and slash

If you mean over-all fiction… that's not really true either, most fiction has NO romance at all, because its irrelevant to the story and that's what pisses me off the most when its done…. 90% of the time its hamfisted as fuck.
Ironically when there is a genuinely decent M/M ship to be found its done like garbage.

Probably the worst is Haku x Naruto… That shit could be done well, but every fic that has a yaoi pairing of the two (and not rule 63) ends up having a really shitting Master-Servant relation or other obnoxious shite.

TL;DR: Its not the gayness that's the issue, its how obnoxious it - and the Fujos who make it - are.


Remember when the worst media was teen angst shit like Hunger Games and Twilight instead of Star Wars Sequels and Captain Marvel? I 'member…. Honestly I wish we could go back to the late 2000s. When 90s culture was still ebbing and things were simpler than they are in the current mess.


People say nostalgia is rose-tinted, but TBH I think its justified.


shut up fag.


Lel, nice try


I find RWBY to be largely boring despite its interesting ideas. Ironically like Fairy Tail however, its rather ripe for fanfiction crossovers.



ok but where can i read karl marx fanfic


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If something doesn't exist in written form then you write it yourself. If you don't know how to you do your research and git gud.


marx… but in halo… 2!!! cameo w/ rwby characters and half the cast is trans
i'll have the prologue written up by tomorrow


Absolutely cringe-worthy


Hey comrade I want some Marx fanfic too >>4056
If I wasn't this lazy I could write it but it needs a lot of research on the industrial revolution and 19th century Germany. The best steampunk books seem so well-researched.


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Teen media was always cringe. If anything, nowadays it has gotten a little better, YA books are actually readable, Disney and Cartoon Network are doing good cartoons again and thanks to the Internet you aren't tied up to watching whatever is on TV.
I still can't fathom how people could stand those awful 00's live-action Disney Channel """"comedy"""" shows and cheap-ass north-american cartoons. Thank god the country I lived in had tons of anime in public TV and I could just watch Rumiko Takahashi's shows instead.


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Kek what a crossover
>Teen media was always cringe
Eh, not really. The edgy cringe and sappy-shit only began to be a proper genre for teens in the late 70s/80s and frankly even until the 90s, with all the angst and other shit, it never reached the levels we got with Twilight or Divergent or other shite.
>cheap-ass north-american cartoons
Such as? Do you mean along the lines of Ben 10 or something more like Rocky and Bullwinkle?
> 00's live-action Disney Channel """"comedy"""" shows
Because it was 'new' and was a teen version of "Friends".
>YA books are actually readable
today? Name one from the past 2-3 years that isn't mediocre at best.
>Disney and Cartoon Network are doing good cartoons again
Bitch where? They haven't stopped shitting the bed since the mid 2010s after shows like Clone Wars, Transformers Prime and Avatar the Last Airbender were supplanted by crap like Steven Boogerverse, Loser of Korra and Transformers RiD.
>thanks to the Internet you aren't tied up to watching whatever is on TV.
Which is why people did torrenting or watched Toonami.
>Anime airing
Good for you I guess but that's not a sign of objectivity. Having live with both anime and Western cartoons through the 90s/early 2000s I'm gonna have to say that between something like Pokemon or Yu Gi Yo or Beyblade and Ben 10, Kim Possible and Gargoyles… I'mma go with the latter.


i read an unhealthy amount of genderbender ranma fanfic


But Ranma is already genderbender, I don't understand.
>Kek what a crossover
It's from a OVA, actually.
>never reached the levels we got with Twilight or Divergent
You might say that, but things like Twilight, Hunger Games, Harry Potter or the Star Wars EU were a huge improvement over the kind of novels marketed at teens in the eighties, for example
>Such as?
Now that I think of it, I think most of the cartoons I remember were canadian, from the same company that made Totally Spies (that one was pretty good tho).
>Because it was 'new' and was a teen version of "Friends"
I suppose you're right
>Bitch where?
Compared to the wasteland of the 00s, based on what I see my cousins watch I think some of the cartoons they make are pretty good. Star and the Forces of Evil, Adventure Time, that one about the three cute bears. I believe that's more of a 10s thingy, I don't know about "current" current cartoons because usually that type of media arrives to my country a few years after it becomes successful in the US.
>something like Pokemon or Yu Gi Yo
That's because Americans got into anime very late and with bottom of the barrel tier shows. TV here in Catalonia in the 00s had tons of good quality anime, from "for all ages" shows Urusei Yatsura, Kimagure Orange Road or Slam Dunk to more experimental things like Revolutionary Girl Utena, Ghost in the Shell Stand Alone Complex or Serial Experiments Lain, and most of them were in public TV. One of the TV channels even had hentai at night for a few years.


From 90s until 2006, just TVC (Televisió de Catalunya, a public TV corporation), aired:

3x3 Eyes
Alí Babà i els 40 lladres [Ari Baba to Yonjuppiki no Tozoku]
Alita, àngel de combat [Gunnm]
Andersen Monogatari
Anpanman [Soreike! Anpanman]
Anya, la noia de la neu [Mori wa Ikiteiru]
Arc the lad
Azuki [Azuki-chan]
Banner i Flappy [Shiiton Doubutsuki Risu no Banner]
Biniki el drac rosa [Serendipity Monogatori Pure to no Nakamatachi]
Blood, l'últim vampir [Blood, the last vampire]
Bola de Drac / Z (inclou diverses pel·lícules)
Bola de Drac GT
Boys Be…
Bubblegum Crisis
Candy Candy
Capità Harlock [Uchu kaizoku Captain Harlock]
Chopy i la princesa [Ribon no kishi]
Cinturó Negre [Yawara]
City Hunter 3
Comic Party
Conan, el nen del futur [Mirai Shounen Conan]
Cobra [Space Adventurer Cobra]
Cowboy Bebop
Dangaioh [Hajataisei Dangaioh]
Devilman [Devilman Tanjo Hen]
Dome, el petit geni del beisbol [Miracle Giants Doumu-kun]
Dominion Tank Police [Dominion Hansai Gundan ]
Doomed Megalopolis [Teito Monagatari]
Club Super3 [TVC] / [IB3]
El capità Harlock [Uchu Kaizoku Captain Harlock]
El castell de Cagliostro (Lupin III) [Lupan Sansei: Kariostro no Shiro]
El detectiu Conan [Meitantei Conan]
El doctor Slump ("remake") [Shin Doctor Slump]
El doctor Slump (dues pel·lícules) [Doctor Slump]
El doctor Slump [Doctor Slump]
El gat amb botes [Nagagutsu o haita neko]
El genet del sabre i els xèrifs galàctics [Sei Jyushi Bismarck]
El gos de Flandes (1975) [Flandes no Inu]
El gran sushi [Mister Ajikko]
El llac dels cignes [Hakucho no Mizumi]
El meu diari estimat [Ai no Gakko Cuore Monogatari]
El meu veí Totoro [Tonari no Totoro]
El món de Rumiko [Rumik's World]
El nen de l'espai [?]
El puny de l'estel del Nord [Hokuto no ken]
El rei Artur [Entaku no Kishi Monogatari: Moero Arthur (1)]
El tritó del mar [Umi no Toriton]
Els dotze regnes [12 Kokuki]
Els guerrers de la llum [Sei Senshi Robin Jr.]
En Horry el monstret
En Jack i la bruixa
Endavant Bun Bun! [Hoero, Bun Bun]
Escaflowne [Tenkuu no Escaflowne]
Escola de Bruixes [Maho Tsukai Tai!]
Evangelion [Shin Seiki Evangelion]
Evangelion, mort i renaixement [Shin Seiki Evangelion: Death and Rebirth]
Evangelion, el final [Shin Seiki Evangelion: The End of Evangelion]
Fly [Dragon Quest - Dai no daiboken]
Fruits Basket
Furi Kuri
Fushigi Yuugi, el joc misteriós [Fushigi Yuugi]
Georgie [Lady Georgie]
Ghost in the Shell
Golgo 13 [The Professional: Golgo 13]
Goshu, el violoncel·lista [Sero Hiki no Goshu]
Green Legend Ran
Grey [Grey Digital Target]
Harley spiny
Harlock Saga
Hattori el ninja [Ninja Hattori-kun]
Hello Sandybell
Heroic Legend of Arislan [Arislan no senki]
Herois a la galàxia (1 OVA) [Ginga Heiya Densetsu]
Hiroshima [Hadashi no Gen]
Històries d'Andròmeda [Andromeda Stories]
Històries d'animals [Shiiton Dobutsuki]
I, my, me! Strawberry eggs
Jeanne, lladre kamikaze [Kamikaze Kaito Jeanne]
Jugo shonen hyoryuki
Jutge de les Tenebres [Anikoku no Judge]
Kai Doh Maru
Karekano [Kareshi Kanojo no Jijou]
Kimagure Orange Road
Kimba el lleó blanc [Jungle Taitei]
Kishin Heidan
La guerra de Lodoss [Lodoss tou Senki]
La increïble brigada Shinzen [Tobe!! Isami]
La llegenda del 4 reis [Legend of the 4 kings]
La màgica DoReMi [Ojamajo DoReMi]
La petita Memole [Tongariboshi no Memol]
La petita Polon [Ochamegami monogatari KoloKolo Polon]
La princesa encantada [Taiyo no oji Hols no daibooken]
La reina del mil·leni [Queen Millennia]
La ventafocs [Cinderella Monogatari]
L'Arcàdia de la meva joventut [Waga Seishun no Arcadia]
L'abella Maia (coproducció amb Alemanya) [Mitsubachi Maya no Boken]
Lady Oscar [Berusaiyu no Bara]
Lain [Serial Experiments Lain]
Lamu [Urusei Yatsura]
Lensman (sèrie) [SF Shinseiki Lensman]
Leo, el rei de la selva [Jungle Taitei]
Les aventures d'en Hutch [Konchuu Monogatari Minashigo Hacchi]
Les aventures d'en Simbad [Arabian Night Sindbad no booken]
Les bessones a Saint Claire [Ochame na futago]
L'estrella dels gegants [Kyojin no Hoshi]
Loki, el detectiu misteriós [Meitantei Loki Ragnarock]
Love Hina (inclou especials de Nadal i primavera)
Macross II [Chojiku Yosai Macross II, lovers again]
Macross Plus
Marco [Haha o tazunete sanzenri]
Mazinger Z
Megazone 23
Mikan [Mikan enikki]
Misha, el petit ós [Koguma no Misha]
Muka Muka [Muka Muka Paradise]
Musculman [Kinnikuman]
New Dominion Tank Police [Shutsugeki! Tank Police]
Ninja Scroll
Odin [Odin - Koshi Hansen Starlight]
Oh! My Goddess (sèrie) [Aa! Megami Sama]
Orphen, el bruixot [Majutsushi Orphen]
Orphen, el bruixot: la revenja [Majutsushi Orphen Revenge]
Patlabor [Kido Seisatsu Patlabor]
Patlabor 2 [Kido Seisatsu Patlabor 2]
Patrasche, el gos de Flandes (1992) [Flandes no Inu, boku no Patrasche]
Pepero [Andes shonen Pepero no boken]
Planeta Venus [Venus Senki]
Plastic Little
Porco Rosso [Kurenai no Buta]
Projecte A-ko [Project A-ko]
Quedes detingut! (sèrie i OVAs) [Taiho Shichauzo]
Queen Emeraldas
Ranma (OVAs) [Ranma 1/2]
Ranma [Ranma 1/2]
Remi [Rittai anime ienaki ko Remi]
RG Veda
Riding Bean
Rocket Kidz: Els herois de la ciutat [Genki Bakuhatsu Ganbaruger]
Roujin Z
Royal Space Force: wings of Honneamise [Oneamisu no tsubasa]
Sailormoon [Bishojo Senshi Sailormoon]
Sailormoon R [Bishojo Senshi Sailormoon R]
Sailormoon S [Bishojo Senshi Sailormoon S]
Sailormoon Sailor Stars [Bishojo Senshi Sailormoon Sailor Stars]
Sailormoon Súper S [Bishojo Senshi Sailormoon Super S]
Sailormoon: el primer amor de l'Ami (OVA) [Sailormoon: Ami's First Love]
Sakura, la caçadora de cartes [Card Captor Sakura]
Sakura, la caçadora de cartes: la pel·lícula [Card Captor Sakura: the movie]
Sherlock Holmes[TVC] / [BTV]
Shiiton dobutsuki kuma no ko Jacky
Shin-chan [Crayon Shin-chan]
Slam Dunk: la gran esmaixada [Slam Dunk]
Speed Racer [Go! Mach 5]
Street Fighter II V
Taro, l'alienígena [Uchuujin Tanaka Tarou]
Tenchi Muyo (7 OVAs) [Tenchi Muyo Ryo-Ohki]
The Cockpit
Tic Tac Toons [Kaiketsu Tamagon: Kaba Totto]
Tokyo Babylon (OVA)
Tom Sawyer [Tom Sawyer no boken]
Touch. Sebango No Nai Ace
Ultimate Teacher [Kyofun no Byoningen Saishu Kyoshi]
Utena [Shoujo Kakumei Utena]
Vampire Princess Miyu [Kyuuketsu Hime Miyu]
Vent d'Amnèsia [Kaze no Namae Wa Amunejia]
Vickie el viking (coproducció amb Alemanya) [Chiisana Vicking Vicke]
Voltron, defensors de l'univers [Hyakujuo Golion]
Wicked City [Yoju toshi]
Yuu Yuu Hakusho: els defensors del més enllà [Yuu Yuu Hakusho]


i mean fics entirely focusing on gender, ones where ranma gets locked in a female form or whatever


… so wht's your point? I can list all the cartoons I've ever watched on TV too and? Are you implying these are all good or what?


I guess I wasn't very clear. My point is that in my country anime was more common on TV than in the US, so maybe that's why we disagree on what you and I would choose to watch back in the day.


Ah, ok understood


I always felt weird about writing fanfiction using established characters and always used OCs. I guess that's me being more interested in writing within the setting than exploring characters differently.


I always cringe at OC fanfiction because its rrely well done and because part of a fiction deserving of fanfiction is the presence of charismatic characters you enjoy. OC fanfiction can be good but that is very rarely pulled off, usually when interaction with the main characters of a fandom are not featured at all.


Anyone have good naruto crossover fic recommendations?


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For me writing about existing characters within a setting was always (and still is) hard because I kept asking myself the question "Am I doing this character justice with how I'm representing them within my story?" That nagging question is still a problem for my attempts at writing my current Black Lagoon fic. Revy for example is such a complex character that I don't know if I'd ever be able to write any interaction where she's involved properly beyond acknowledging some key features of hers like
>Plentiful use of swearing
>Casual racism
>Sociopathic tendencies
>Deep-seated nihilism
>General hotheadedness and impulsiveness
>Avoidance of attachment and intimacy
>Preference of violence over diplomacy
>Excellent marksmanship


In my case its the opposite, the issue isn't writing them accurately, the original work has done that for me and its fairly easy to write out their defining characteristics to prevent OOCness, the issue is usually going through the steps needed to make sure their background and surroundings aren't an utter void


Anyone have short reflective fics?



Reposting from this profile https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7383559/Silent-Songbird

The Baker

A Short Story by Silent Songbird

Once upon a time, a young lady was baking in her kitchen. She loves baking. One day, she realizes that maybe she should share her love of baking. She bakes a nice apple pie and then puts in front of her house, hanging the sign "free pie". People come around, they taste the pie and they LOVE it! She feels flattered and happy that people love her baking, and she feels good that she fed some people. So, the next day, she bakes some more. More people come for the free pie, and they love it even better. This goes on, she bakes, they come, they eat, she feels good and they feel good.

Then one day, she decides to mix it up. She bakes cupcakes and muffins instead of pie.

The people… They lose their shit.

"Oh my God! Why the hell did you make cupcakes?"

"You had something good here and you ruined it!"

"You can't bake for shit! This is shit! Kill yourself for making this."

Baffled by the vehemence of the people, she goes back to making her free pie and giving it out once more. Sent thinks, maybe it was a mistake to make cupcakes. That won't happen again. Except, it does. The people lose their shit again. This time, she didn't even have to change her bakery.

"Ugh, there's too much sugar in this."

"Damn it, there's not enough sugar in this!"

"The pie crust is missing! I thought you knew how to bake?"

What had started as a hobby and gave the young lady pleasure, had instead grown into something else. A chore. A task. And slowly, little by little, the lady began to hate what she baked. She began to hate the task of baking. And just like that, one day, there was no pie outside her house.

And the people had the gall, to ask her why.

The End.

If you are among the percentage of people on this site who are not arrogant enough to forget that fan fiction is written freely, and authors expect no reward for their hard work except for the satisfaction of people appreciating their work and stories, then feel free to copy my little story to your profile.


I wish fanfiction.net had a fucking blacklist function


An ability to edit/remove your own old reviews would be a good idea too.


Fanfic mods are too busy scratching their ball to look at such criticisms


What is the most disturbing fanfic you have read /hobby/?


Reposting: The Worst fic I ever read was a Naruto one where after chapters of decent writing a completely unwarned rape lemon with gore and scat was written featuring Iruka and Kakashi raping Haku and Naruto. It was horrendous in that it was written with such detail and care, I stppped reading as soon as my brain caught up to the sheer shock. It was worse than that 1 fic where the Giant Squid makes out with Hogwarts (yes that is a real fic).


Nindo of the force is one of the few good Naruto/StarWars crossovers

A recently written one: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13617022/1/The-Blonde-Boy


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This is just a bit funny so I thought I'd share.

There is a fanfic writer called Fairy Tail Dragon Slayer who is without doubt the biggest Naruto wanker in the world, he puts Naruto at universal+ level right now nd for some reason does a lot of DxD crossovers while inserting Naruto in the most obnoxious way possible. A few early fics of his were passable, back when he hadn't lost his marbles, but current stuff is just nasueating.

Now recently in Shin DxD Volume 4 Great Red was 'easily' killed And of course said fanfic writer took great amounts of pride in using this as a reason to say that Naruto's higher tiers are way stronger than Great Red. (spoilers) https://twitter.com/FairyTailDragon/status/1285122548917821442

The sheer absurdity of the statement was so much so, that I decided that, "hey, whatever let me reply to this fucker for kicks"… his response was that I'm a fool and know nothing about Naruto… which is false given that I am a Naruto fan and I know the power-scaling of the series well. I responded that I was sad that he thought so, but disagreements are irrelevant for fictional characters anyway and bid him a good day. The response was fairly disproportionate, he sent NINE separate messages in less than 2 hours replying to my post and then blocked me, which made the entire conversation get hidden so that I couldn't even read his responses. Given that I was also quite polite with him and simply wished a good day despite disagreeing, his actions are very petulant.

Now some of FTDS' early calcs of Naruto feats were good and accurate and are consistent with feats and databooks (pics related for an example), but now he's using verbal hyperbole to say that 'Momoshiki' sucked the energy from several universes and that combined power was taken down by Naruto in Boruto… which now makes Naruto multi-versal level… like fuck me that is a level beyond normal wanking. Even MudaMudaMuda on comicvine never wanked that hard. Now for perspective, Great Red is a character who represents a metaphysical concept - dreams and illusions - and is equal in power to the dragon of infinity Ophis, both are above all gods in the series including the omnipresent and deceased biblical god. So tell me, how is Naruto, a human with demi-god abilities supposed to fight that?

So that's the gist of it. Frankly as a casual Naruto-fan, this is the kind of shit that created the whole 'Narutard' meme, and makes it impossible to talk about the show without some brainlet repeating that dead strawman to "btfo de naruto fans". Honestly take this wierdo and use him as an example of what NOT to do as a fan and a fanfic writer.


Kek this nibba has the audacity to continue posting his rant in a review when he realized that blocking me prevents me from seeing his shitpost rants. Its several thousand words long FFS and is full of such nonsequiturs and other shit that I can't help but laugh. Fucking deleting his ass, its too much idiocy.


shinji's nightmare cataclysm


Oh fuck I forgot that, why did you remind me.


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Fanworks are very creative sometimes. An interesting (abandoned) fic is Mobzilla, which I was reminded of by Pic 1.




The tale of 1990's Yugoslavia teleporting into a Noble Bright world of wonder and peace. Safe to say, fun and good times are had by all.



Read a surprising good fanfic where Kakashi ends up in Middle Earth after fucking around with Kamui and getting his chakra coils and eye totally fucked. Really well written IMO.


I'm a die-hard Star Wars fan but I was very dissapointed with how Disney is handling the franchise. Since I don't have anything to do because of corona I've been thinking for a while of writing my own AU sequel trilogy, just to see if I can do a better job than Lucasfilm. Should I try it or it will be cringe? And if I do write it, I should do it in my mother tongue or in English?


>Should I try it or it will be cringe?
Of course you should try writing it, you only get better at writing by doing. I certainly know what material I wrote early on was absolute cringe too (it probably still is, but I try to think about it less and less). That's no reason to stop writing altogether, rather take it as a reason to continue improving your craft until it reaches to a point that its no longer cringe to read instead. Remember that you yourself are your own biggest critic in most cases and even if you might spot every little mistake you make grammar or lorewise, your average reader is not a professional critic and will usually tend enjoy a story regardless of the errors if its otherwise a decent read.
>And if I do write it, I should do it in my mother tongue or in English?
Please write it in English so I can read it. I'm really interested in seeing what you can come up with.


Definitely do, it just for the sake of improving your writing if nothing else.
English, Spanish or Russian is the most widely read fanfic languages. I would suggest sticking to English and if necessary getting a beta writer to adjust your grammar and spelling


You should definitely try it and not just because there is no way you could worse than JJ fucking Abrams.


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thinking back wistfully on the lion king fanfic I never finished after 100k words or something. always thought I'd go on to write an actual novel at some point, but all I've done since is be a wagie and smoke weed

didn't need this feel tbh
You might as well. But honestly, the old EU was already full of marvelous follow ups on the OT, like as not you'll be retreading something someone else already did. Of course if that doesn't bother you, pic related.

What's your pitch?


> the lion king fanfic I never finished
Link nigga?

Or Rianna Johnson


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Damn nigga this isn't half bad. The English is well written and the pacing seems to be fine and the story in the first few chapters I've read seems good enough. Seeing the T-rating you clearly didn't put in any lemons so looks fine to me.


>the old EU was already full of marvelous follow ups on the OT
I'm aware, I've got a ton of old Bantam era books plus the entire NJO series.

>What's your pitch?

Well, I haven't the whole thing plotted yet, but my basic idea is to start from the situation Disney started from (clean slate, only the movies and TCW are canon) and try to base the characters a bit on George Lucas's original plot.
The plot would be about Kira, a female padawan investigating a series of strange murderers along his master, Ben Solo. Eventually, they would discover a sect of darksiders formed by the old red guards, who are trying to ressurrect Palpatine and rebuild the Sith order. During the fight with the sect, Ben would be defeated and "killed", leading Kira into a revenge-fueled spree around the galaxy to destroy the remnants of the Sith.
But Ben is not really dead, he faked it because he has his own agenda. Because of shit that happened in his youth, he has lost faith on the Force, the Jedi and the Republic. Maybe throw a bit of Kreia-posting in the mix for good measure. He has been secretly building up a network of like-minded jedi and adopts the persona of Kylo Ren, starting a travel around the galaxy to learn about the origins of the Jedi, the Sith and the Force, with the goal of ending once and for all the struggle between the light and the dark.
This will split the jedi order in two, and start a jedi civil war. Kira then decides to find Luke, who abandoned known space decades ago to concentrate on studying the will of the force, because he's the only one respected enough by everyone to mediate and put an end to the conflict. Luke will help Kira to return from her brush with the dark side and make her a better jedi, and together they reveal that Kylo Ren is actually Ben Solo.
In a final gambit to defeat both the Jedi and the Sith, Ben Solo uses his status as Darth Vader's heir to unify all the former imperial warlords and loyalists, claims the imperial throne and launches an attack against the New Republic and the Jedi order. Then there's a big battle, and presumely the good guys win, I guess.


thanks bro, appreciate it. maybe I'll pick it up again idk
it's already better than all of neo-star wars and it's only just a concept. tho isn't
>Ben Solo uses his status as Darth Vader's heir to unify all the former imperial warlords and loyalists
undercut by Vader's turn at the end of RotJ? plus I always figured the imperial navy & administration all kinda really disliked Vader. fear him without feeling much loyalty


>by Vader's turn at the end of RotJ?
Well, that depends. Only Sheev, Vader and Luke were there. Based on the ending of RotJ we don't really know if Vader's turn became common knowledge around the galaxy or if the identity of Luke's parents are known outside of his circle of friends.
In the old EU if I remember correctly people knew all of it, but in the Disney canon Darth Vader true identity was a secret until a while before TFA. So it depends on how it is written.
>I always figured the imperial navy & administration all kinda really disliked Vader
Yeah, but given how atomized the imperials are after RotJ, a strong figure with some legitimacy over the throne could become a powerful unifying force for a resurgent Empire. Thrawn was disliked too, before he started winning battles against the New Republic. And so was Daala, to a lesser extent.




Try the Terminators: Hunters and Killers series


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Does anyone have an AU fic where Misato and Shinji switch positions


I think that you could actually try what was mentioned in >>6959 where Rey and Kylo (or if you REALLY hate the sequels Luke and his friends) create a third path, discarding the relics of the fascist Empire and succ-dem Republic in lieu of a third path - socialism (though I suggest that you name it something else because A - world-building & B - To keep idiots out of the reviews)


I don't know if this is just me, but for some strange reason when PMing other fanfic authors they tend to have very negative responses despite messages being polite and inoffensive. Does anyone else experience this or what?


only ever had positive interactions tbh




I… what?


go for it.

I would suggest reading some of the better novels of the new canon Thrawn, Bloodline, Catalyst, as they give a good insight into the political economy of the Empire and the galaxy


MLP gore fic.


Ooooooh you mean something like this?


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Hey guys, I'm the guy from >>/anime/2514 who is making a boruto fanfiction, with the intent of "rebuilding" it, so to speak.
So, here's the link to my fanfiction (it's in spanish): https://www.wattpad.com/story/238608903-boruto-remade
I posted it in Wattpad since I don't really know where to put it, also Wattpad is kinda big so more people will read it and such.


I would suggest fanfiction.net as a much better place. The viewership is much higher there and the format is easier to leave comments on.


>The viewership is much higher there
Is it really?
I mean, I'm doing this story in spanish, not in english, so I don't know.


Fanfiction.net is the most prolific fanfiction site currently in existance followed by archive of our own. Wattpad is generally the 3rd most common followed by various specialized sites such as Narutofanfiction and HarryPotterfanfiction.


Yeah but is it for spanish speakers is what I'm saying.
Is there a spanish fanfiction.com that regular people with no access to english can use?


Fanfiction.net and archive of our own have spanish functions m8.



Not the worst I've read but certainly a horrifically weird one.
TL;DR: The basilisk takes the idea of "Fuck mudbloods" literally.


Speaking of the Giant Squid there is a peculiar but thankfully ungraphic fic where Lily Evans, under Amortentia essentially is impregnated by the giant squid…. it was wierd, but not outright horrifying. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11969154/2/I-Would-Rather


LOL so this nigga just made a new update to his account in which he calls himself neutral and independent and that harassment is bad. Like this MoFo unironically threatens to call the police to doxx someone for "harassment" which given post related and his numerous over-reactions over disagreements is hilarious. His supposed disdain of Comicvine and Vsbattles is beyond ironic TBH.

Honestly what is wrong with this twit?


What continues to baffle me is why does he call himself Fiary Tail Dragon Slayer when EVERYTHING he posts is just Naruto-wank?


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Forgot to say but he had a joke-battles wiki page dedicated to his Naruto fagging but it was taken down September 2nd because of new rules, pic related is the screenshot.


What's the most annoying thing to have in a fanfiction? Why?
I'll start
>OOC main characters
Why the fuck would you take a show, and a character that is the main staple of how the show works and change them entirely? If a character is perverted or really happy and make them into an edgy cunt or secretly evil or a supergenius for no reason? Just make your own ripoff series and do that.



>platform for their political beliefs
I can honestly say I've never seen this before.. but I agree it would likely be annoying AF
>he way people like this write makes me think they never finished their primary education
A lot of fanfic writers are young teens who don't spell-check or proof-read so you're not too far off the mark.
>SI just wants to become friends with the main cast so they can experience the main plot
I don't mind those stories personally however I recognize that intrinsically the presence of an SI to follow a story would lead to changes in the plot.
>becoming an entrepreneur™ and starting their own business
Holy fuck this, I fucking hate this, can't believe I forgot about this kind of shit.


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>I can honestly say I've never seen this before.. but I agree it would likely be annoying AF
It was a one off thing really, but it has stuck pretty vividly in my mind because I read pretty far into the story itself because it tickled my gun autism itch but eventually his A/N bullshit just got too cringy for me and I ended up dropping the whole thing.
>A lot of fanfic writers are young teens who don't spell-check or proof-read so you're not too far off the mark.
I'd get it if that was the case but the ones I'm talking about were (according to their profiles) grown-ass adults.
>I don't mind those stories personally however I recognize that intrinsically the presence of an SI to follow a story would lead to changes in the plot.
The problem is that not every fanfic author always recognizes the fact that having even one extra person participating in an event has the potential to cause major change in the outcome of said event, let alone a person with meta-knowledge regarding the world and future events.


>grown ass adults
LOL really? That's prtty sad TBH
>let alone a person with meta-knowledge regarding the world and future events
There is actually a really good fanfic that does this really well; A story about a girl who drops into Harry Potter world and with her knowledge of the Riddle Diary derails everything. It's actually really well written IMO.


What are the most kino things of a fanfic?


When written by good authors they can expand the verse or rewrite a story even better than the original media.


Is there any commie fanfiction? By this I mean a fic where the protagonist or any actor in it is involved in explicit revolutionary shit.


Let me introduce you to the revelry of Communist Harry Potter. It is the most hilarious shit ever where he literally goes around calling out all the bourg shit and calling for Gulags and Guillotines


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Having read past the first two chapters, this fic seems like its just one big shitpost on the author's part down to the A/N. Then again it IS classified as a parody. Like, everyone in the fic is obviously a caricature, including Harry himself.


What about the video sounds russian? Just because it's on a piano and in minor key?


Is it okay to post just general writing shit in here? I've been sort of doing poetry/musings and I want someone to run them by but I got nobody for that.


Just do it


alright here goes nothing.

"How fucked up is it, the notion of dying like a dog?

The dog, man’s best friend, part of the family, the lovable scamp.

Stripped of dignity, lacking in honor. A cold, humiliating end.

But why?

Is the subservient relationship we’ve formed miserable?

When did the arrangement of man and canine stop being mutually beneficial?

Are dogs commodity or friends? Is the concept of friendship a commodity?

Maybe we’ve been taught that living for the pack is miserable. Maybe it’s the cult of individuality.

I detest this, I find it abjectly terrifying.

For when you shouted, I knew we were brothers.

You shook my hand, even if you were lacking in digits.

We shared bread and loving glances.

You could sense when I was sad, and I’d like to believe I could tell when you were upset too.

When you left, I didn’t know what to say. Maybe that silence was the deprivation of your dignity.

I won’t let that memory of you go cold. I refuse this premise!!

I lived for your happiness, you and I, we were family!

You and I, any man or beast on this cold blue planet. We all deserve dignity.

I may die a dog’s death, but I reject the notion of my life having more value than yours.

We all have to live for each other, you taught me that without uttering a single word.

I can’t think of anything more noble than living to love."

I'm very, very rusty. Tell me what parts of it read poorly. The whole idea is that it's kind of fucked up that society sees dog ownership as something of a commodity, thereby making their existence lesser or whatever. It's just sad to think about because I'm sure the animals themselves don't think the same. It creates this messy notion of hierarchy in what theoretically should be a mutual existence.


Recently read link related: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12944357/1/Multiverse-Tournament
It's not the best fic but its decently written for something this vast. Unfortunately I finished reading it and google gives me shitty wattpad results that are unreadable. Does anyone have/know some multi-versal anime tournament fanfics worth reading? I just want to read characters I know from different series interact in a fight outside of lengthy crossworld fics.


Reposting from /anime/
Not a big fan of these shows (mecha-musume) or their fanfictions (mostly out of how ridiculous they are), however I do enjoy some of it casually.

However one fanfiction of Kantai Collection that I enjoyed very much was a rather unique fanfic called Kancolle: Exodus Initiative, a sadly incomplete fanfiction where the main character is a Soviet battlecruiser of experimental nature, The Stalingrad, the first ship of the Stalingrad Class Project 82 battlecruisers*. The Abyssals take over most of the world and rule in collaboration with the countries of the world, but there are groups of shipgirls and people who are fighting back in a revek struggle). The fic begins in a bit of a confusing way (intentionally mirroring the chaos of the situation) but eventually clarifies a bit more. One of the interesting aspects is how they address Shipgirls. They physically embody their ships, so removing and replacing ribs and taping together organs or losing arms is treated as normal for them. Another unique part that reflects a bit of the Kancolle movie, is that they retain the memories of war that their soldier's and crew fought in. A unique aspect of the main character is that, the Soviet Navy, whose forces were often stuck fighting on land, since the Germans did not seek to engage in direct naval confrontation and tried to lock them in port with mines and nets, thus Stalingrad (the shipgirl) retains vivid and horrendous memories of the war. Her soviet perspective and ideology is also an influence and interesting aspect. (SPOILERS) Her mannerisms and ideology are initially treated with jocular quality, but it becomes a bit of a plot point in the last chapters. Part of this is seen with her hidden split personality 'Koba', who enunciates her position and is more dangerously and direct (SPOILERS). I think this is so appealing to me because my Great-grandfather fought in the war and my own appreciation of the USSR.
TL;DR: I liked the commie ship and the way it was done

Original fic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11720694/13/Kancolle-Exodus-Initiative
Russian Translation: https://ficbook.net/readfic/9269278/24003647#part_content

*These ships are insane compared to any other battlecruiser and their internal systems honestly would be a good study for future warships and the range on the experimental guns was impressive.
- http://www.e-reading.club/chapter.php/1002749/11/superlinkory-stalina-sovetskiy-soyuz-kronshtadt-stalingrad.html
- http://archive.is/VQJd8


I wrote a book of poetry



Probably goes in the poetry thread. but not bad. At least you're doing something


Oops sorry I thought this was a different thread. And thank you! I'm working on a second book now and am probably gonna call it quits after 3 poem books total


There is a fanfic author called Yojimbra who used to do a lot of fairly well written Naruto fanfics (often gender bender ones) but then stopped and switched to BNHA. While their profile says "a vacation" from Naruto, the author is in fact never intending to write that fiction again and is quite hostile to the fandom in general suddenly. I have no idea why though. Does anyone know what happened?


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any room for lads writing alt-history fiction here? i mean, it's essentially writing fanfiction versions of real life


Yep definitely


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Technically historical fanfiction is still fanfiction, so I'd say go for it.


Which weird timeline do you have in mind?


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Reposting this edited fanfic tier green
>be you
>Leningrad,January 1943
>It's been two years since you lost all of your family to the Wehrmacht when they were defending the city during Operation Barbarossa
>all you have left is your younger brother
>both assigned to guard the western entrance of Leningrad
>both in the same abandoned apartment for three months now
>the temperature is cold as ever >feeling like shit, you haven't slept for days
>only equipped with a coat,a hat,a pistol And a mosin-sniper
>you decide to leave your brother in the building to get some food and ammo but warns him to be on alert for any enemies,he accepts
>half an hour pass
>you hear from the other soldiers
that the red army managed to reconnect with the city and that the Nazis in Stalingrad are losing costly
>happy as fuck,you decide to tell your bro.
>you hurry back to the fourth floor looking for him
>you stand there in shock
>your heart starts beating, seeing your brother with a Nazi fills you with both anger and fear
>you drop what ever you were carrying and pull out your revolver
>she notices you, when you grab her luger
>(comrade,its not what it looks like… well it is but let me explain, this is Minna, she defected weeks ago after seeing no point of fighting for Hitler and the fascists anymore and I've been hiding her here ever since)
>she interrupts (It's true! when we asked that bastard for winter clothes all he said was keep going and gave false promises. He told us lies and drove us to hate your people. He is throwing us all to die just so he can fulfill his crazy dreams and drive the whole world against Germany, so if you're gonna shoot me now know this, I'm seeking revenge on Hitler and his butcher generals and to prove that I stole documents containing the proximity of Von Leebs's army and their numbers, I will fight and help you stop him!
And by the way i don't know how to say this but your brother here is a good young man, who did not kill me on sight when I surrendered to him with my tale)
>he responds (please don't kill her brother, I love her I really did find a connection with her, a connection that I want to keep alive)
>You're in a sticky situation; on one hand your brother is what is left for you in this world and on the other you fucking hate nazis and ought to kill them…

>what do you do?

From a romanticized perspective, find a way to get her docs checked for legitimacy, think of a good story for the officers to keep them from just POWing her and maybe getting her to fight for the Red Army with us as a communist, once all suspicion is cleared.

Maybe she was doing a Mulan to stop her sickly brother from being conscripted or something as the war forced Germany to start recruiting more people. Pretending to be him she slipped into the fighting up North. The Shan-Yu of the story would Papa Stalin or some other communist avatar, except she realizes he was right and the Nazis are worse. Then she joins a woman's sniper regiment or something. What would she do after the war? Return to the now called DDR or keep looking for her brother? Marry that guy from the story? Maybe all three and retire in the USSR?

Pragmatically speaking from a real world view; disarm her and take the documents immediately then report to the nearest commissar and ask him what is to be done. Probably going to keep her POW until the war ends, though sometimes German deserters joined the Red Army. However even if she has docs she is not to be trusted under any circumstance until her intentions are proven genuine.



The original doujin, called Bad Romance, is worse - about a Nazi dominating a Soviet youth - but it's been mostly wiped from the internet


I came across this I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream-fic a while back and I must say it's one of the more vile fics I've found so far. The source material is fairly horrifying as it is (thanks Harlan Ellison), but this thing stuck with me for several days. You have been warned.


This is a masochistic fantasy fic if I've ever seen one… not unusual, but quite vile indeed.


Original poster here,thank you for finishing my post but i still think its not done yet


Then finish it m, I just reposted it so it wouldn't be lost.


I found the ultimate match in a Sasuke wanker so bad every post of his is about how Sasuke is great while Naruto is not while kicking Sakura while they're at it, all using cherry-picked scans and badly translated/assumed words. Has a hateboner for Kakashi too. Really brings back the days of Sasuke-suckers of the Naruto fandom.




I want a fic where Gorbachev gets stopped and videos related gets put into power, bringing the USSR back to the right path.


Fanfiction.net is going to shit, update the fanlore and download what you want.

On that note, anyone got a reliable fanfiction downloader they can reccommend?



Probably one of the funniest Troll fics I've read. Really encapsulates the Banishment fic trope.


Found this gem of the old internet yesterday. https://www.aladdincentral.org/library/index.php
It's rather interesting to recall how there used to be so many independent forums being made by different fandoms for their fiction and discussions.
narutofic.org for Naruto
The Quidditch Pitch, mugglenetfanfiction and hpfanficarchive for Harry Potter
and Apartment 402 for Evangelion.

I feel a certain nostalgia for the old internet TBH.


Moe lolishit
As a straight dude, I hate that as well.


There is a similar Naruto fanfic called Dragonfly by pecollia where an SI girl is reborn as some Uchiha and knowing what Itachi will do decides to live her next decade to the fullest before accepting demise. It was both frustrating and emotional


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Sorry I missed your response and didn't reply. 4 months late, but whatever
Seriously? What was it called?
>a huge improvement over the kind of novels marketed at teens in the eighties
True, but somewhat debateable. The quality rose with Star Wars EU and other stuff, but generally 80s paperbacks were more interesting than stuff from the 2010s.
>for example
>ost of the cartoons I remember were canadian, from the same company that made Totally Spies
Ah, that might be it. I mean Canada had some banger shows, but a lot of it was cheap trash because budget constraints. I still remember Kid vs Kat and other stuff like Totally Spies (pic related). Good times.

>Star and the Forces of Evil, Adventure Time

I'm going to be honest, those are both terrible shows, and while the latter is defended by fans to th death, Star & Marco have been lambasted for years at this point, as has LH and other cringe. The 000s had A LOT of good stuff, but because it wasn't exported well, you probably didn't see it, stuff like Ben 10, ATLA, Generator Rex, Kim Possible Danny Phantom, Rocko's Life, Recess and more. In the past 5 years I can't name a single childrens show that I would be comfortable letting kids see or bother with. It's much easier to turn on old TMNT and other shows and let them watch that instead.
>Americans got into anime very late and with bottom of the barrel tier shows.
That's true, but to be fair that was the most popular product world wide, along with a lot of other things
That was popular in the USA, but it's an adult anime TBH
>One of the TV channels even had hentai at night for a few years.
Really? top kek, did it ever play Stainless Night or Angel City?


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pic related, someone write this


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Pastebin.com is now smart-filtering all things it deems 'naughty' not to UNLISTED, but to PRIVATE because of the new rules*. This is explicitly a step to piss off porn/smut writer archivers (like tumblr did but worse). If the author is dead or otherwise unavailable, THE STORY IS FUCKED.

>no pornographic information / links


Ghostbin.co and https://archiveofourown.org/tags/Original%20Work/works Because they don't exactly police original content


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one anon scraped desu's /trash/ archive for Pastebin IDs back in October. There are about 6600 pastes. It should be pretty complete, but some pastes may be missing (e.g. pastes posted after October). Hope this helps.
Here is a dump (60 MB zip): http://u.smutty.horse/lypnscfokrc.zip
Here is a listing (no titles, but you can search for ID and author. Guest pastes under "a guest"): https://u.smutty.horse/lypnsgiqijg.txt
As always, archive everything >>>/gulag/5621


I try to write like Kurt Vonnegut a bit more after being published by an institution under his name. Any other anons like him? He seemed like a left leaning Dem but he had other based things going for him like Humanism.eurekaEureka


How the fuck do I write? I'm doing a fan comic and a couple of fan visual novels (both pretty short). Honestly I don't want to hire a writer, I want to do it myself.


What is/are your favorite font(s) /hobby/?

I use Gills Sans for titles/headers and Garamond for body text.international_brigadeInternational Brigade


Arial and Arial Bold


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At least use Helvetica (which is overrated IMO).


I like Century Gothic actually, out of the fonts that come free with Word.
But Arial is my default font.


Liberation Sans


Century Gothic is OK. Personally, I use a combination of Franklin Gothic and Century Schoolbook for work as they come free for work and look good for legal documents.

Liberation Sans is good, it is my default font for my Linux OS.international_brigadeInternational Brigade


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I use Times New Roman, but that's mostly because it's the one that I've just defaulted to rather than because I find it aesthetically pleasing or anything like that.



Same for me and Arial, I'm just too lazy to take the time to try using all the other fonts to find one I like more. Though I've found that I like Century Schoolbook and Century Gothic.


this is real funny that the thread is talking about fonts
i was watching the middle and like the kid init has a club that talks solely about fonts

Is it true that uppercase manifesto and nexa bold were inspired from the 1920's italian rationalist movement?


So does anyone have any tips on how to successfully sell scripts for let's say a TV show? I plan on writing some pilot scripts soon and just curious how to go about something like this.


bump i want to know too


my guess would be to find a list of agents, and then send it off to them , choosing the ones who are into what you're working on e.g. comedy
I've only looked into submitting for books though unless someone has a better idea


So what is everyone currently writing?

I'm writing some cyberpunk fiction about this garbage truck operator turned into a pawn for a corporate war.


How long until fanfiction is c&d material


What I usually hear is that it already is, it's just not considered worth suing over.


THERE'S A FONT CALLED Microsoft Uighur???


I was writing a big post about retard idealism to kantian idealism to hegelian idealism to marxist diamat. It's problematic to anyone who actually knows the subject matter, and I decided to stop writing it. It's in spanish too.


I'm writing a Black Lagoon fanfic where Rock is implied to have died during the events of the pilot episode due to being shot by Revy during one of her usual tantrums and his role within the original plot has been (partially) taken over by someone else, not gonna spoil much more than that.

If that isn't enough to sell the premise, I'll just say that there's gonna be a few interesting original characters introduced in the future including a former female member of the Provisional IRA.

I'll provide link if people are interested.spurdoSpurdo


>mfw my bestfriend only wants me writing smutty fics
>mfw i want to write "deep" and "meaningful" fanfics
>Too scared to write anything orginal let alone publishing something

I can't just keep writing Invader Zim and Orc smut all my life, c-can I?


Anyone willing to tell me how shit my writing is? Need critical readers to kill what's left of my passion.



would like to read it


Here you go then. Note that you need to make an account to access the thread since it's in the NSFW section of the site. I don't publish on FF.net or any other sites at the moment.spurdoSpurdo


anyone writing anything original?


Can't you do both?


What do you mean by that? Well I'm planning to write a pretty ambitious genre switch story that begins in a high school and ends as communist propaganda


as in not fanfiction, but that sounds interesting, was gonna write about a teacher trying to teach in a dystopian setting


That sounds better than what I'm going to write tbh


leftypol monthly writing competition or some shit when? also we need to set up a matrix chat




trying my hand at a post-apocalyptic science-fantasy adventure story with some political and ideological themes for background.

Also trying a more generic fantasy adventure, which is more simpler but writing itself better.


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>I can't just keep writing Invader Zim and Orc smut
>Invader Zim… smut
fuckin' hell go to horny jail now!


Anyone else read that published Evangelion fanfiction series? There's like 5 books and a 6th one being written. It's Russian and is probably on the biggest fanfictions I have ever seen that isn't just a trash dump.


What’s everyone else’s acceptance rate with trad publishing or lit mags and journalseurekaEureka



How many times have you written about Gaz getting that fat alien cock?


Reminds me a bit of the Blood Mining thread from /leftyb/


If anyone is interested a rather odd crossover of Friday 13th and Familiar of Zero is up for adoption and if anyone's interested PM the author. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12524976/1/The-Unstoppable-Familiar


Anyone else feel like they lack the conceptual skills to properly evoke emotion in their writing? Just finished Disco Elysium and my writing in comparison feels like a little kid's drawing.


It comes with practice. Frankly I find it best to picture myself as a character in the situation and thinking "what would be consistent with my character to feel and say" and from there write it out.


I dunno, man. It feels like I'm actually lacking something foundational to my cognition. As in, I will only ever be capable of flimsy conceptualisation, no matter how much I practice.


It's possible (some people have trouble picturing objects or concepts in their heads) but I think the best is to just
A) read a lot of wordy literature, expand your vocabulary
B) whenever you see a situation, a conversation, or whatever, try to step back and place yourself as one of the people and empathize with them, just let the words that come to mind go on paper, and then reorganize and clean it up afterwards.


>It's possible (some people have trouble picturing objects or concepts in their heads) but I think the best is to just

Thing is, I never used to have trouble picturing things, but it seems as though my imagination has become tired and using it for extended periods of time, say, long enough to write a decent scene, feels laborious. I used to have a better flow of ideas and emotions, but now I struggle to even come up with a conventional metaphor, let alone a novel one.

>A) read a lot of wordy literature, expand your vocabulary

B) whenever you see a situation, a conversation, or whatever, try to step back and place yourself as one of the people and empathize with them, just let the words that come to mind go on paper, and then reorganize and clean it up afterwards.

That's good advice, thanks anon. Any book recommendations?


>now I struggle
It's because of social media and the internet, no joke, this shit fucks your head until your attention span is short as fuck and you stop being creative in lieu of just copying and imitating what you already know.
No problem, I used this to get through writers block (I'm still writing out my story(s) tho)
>Any book recommendations?
For metaphors and a wider grasp of synonyms I suggest Gerald Durrell's books on his childhood on the island of Corfu (My Family and Other Animals is the first book), his adventures as a zoologist in Africa and his fiction books The Mockery Bird, Rosie is my Relative and The Talking Parcel, all of which are very funny and descriptive with vast vocabularies.

For conveying emotional feelings in a situation I suggest Hemingway's Old Man and The Sea and The Great Brain series by J.D. Fitzgerald. Mark Twain, Sid Fleischman, Jack London (particularly White Fang, Sea Wolf, and Call of the Wild) and Roald Dahl all have very varied and creative ways of describing emotions, feelings and expressions.


>It's because of social media and the internet, no joke, this shit fucks your head until your attention span is short as fuck and you stop being creative in lieu of just copying and imitating what you already know.

Yeah, I've had a feeling it might be that. I hope it's something that can be repaired, otherwise I may as well off myself, lol. Being conscious of the beauty of reality but unable to fully capture it, even just a small measure, would kill me.

>For metaphors and a wider grasp of synonyms I suggest Gerald Durrell's books on his childhood on the island of Corfu (My Family and Other Animals is the first book), his adventures as a zoologist in Africa and his fiction books The Mockery Bird, Rosie is my Relative and The Talking Parcel, all of which are very funny and descriptive with vast vocabularies.

Thanks, mate. Those all sound interesting. Might have to train myself to read recreationally again, however. I'll see if I can grab a copy of a Durrell and a Hemingway on amazon or some shit.

Hell, might even try cracking open the copy of The Idiot I've had lying around for half a decade.


>something that can be repaired
Stay off the internet as much as possible, turn off social media and read books and watch good movies. In terms of health work out a bit (even just morning exersizes already helps) eat healthy and drink a teaspoon of apple vinegar cider in a glass of water daily (flouridated water causes calcification of the pituitary gland in the brain which is responsible for creativity and the ability to think outside the box) and eat peppers (they have chemicals that essentially kill frayed and worn out Neuron endings and force the brain to 'update' itself, keeping your mind fresh and memories secure).
This takes time to have an impact. Also if you do porn, minimize it, porn has a direct impact on Grey Matter, dopamine release and attention span.
>conscious of the beauty of reality but unable to fully capture it, even just a small measure, would kill me.
That's how I felt a while back.
>I'll see if I can grab a copy
> train myself to read recreationally
Yes, "One should never stop learning… After all, if you're not learning, you're not growing, and if you're not growing, you might as well be dead…"


Do people here have routine or discipline themselves to write everyday or so? I'd take some tricks, if I let myself write only when I want I don't do enough and tend to leave projects unfinished


i still don't get how fluoride would result in calcium buildup on the pituitary gland, assuming that is what you mean by "calcification". the rest of the advice is solid tho. where did you read this?


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>reaad this
If you refer to the other advice on writing - personal experience. If you are referring to the flouride -I'll just dump my old post on Flouride for that:
>Fluoride build up in the body causes calcification of the pineal gland in the brain.
>Calcification of the pineal gland and the resulting degradation results in a worse sense of direction among other negative consequences.
The prevalence of pineal gland calcification was 58.8%. There was no statistically significant correlation between age and the extent of the calcification. The prevalence of calcification was 58.6% in females and 59.0% in males. The average anteroposterior measurement was 3.73±1.63 mm, while the average mediolateral measurement was 3.47±1.31 mm. The average total calcified area was 9.79±7.59 mm2.
>Excessive flouride damages your teeth with fluorosis.
Fluoride in dental care products is useful, it's water treatment in particular that lacks evidence. Kind of like how magnesium in your diet is an important nutrient, but gargling Epsom salt will kill you from hypermagnesemia. The action mechanism for fluoride strengthening of teeth is entirely topical. You get all the fluoride you could need from toothpaste and mouthwash. Ingesting fluoride means it has to run its way through all your bodily process and then return to your mouth in salivary secretions at very low concentrations for any sort of action on teeth. High bodily concentrations of fluoride can make bones brittle and actually can stunt brain development in children. The only reason we treat our tap water with extra fluoride is because the phosphate fertilizer industry produces hexafluorosilicic acid as a by-product and water fluoridation is used as an excuse to just dump it in the water supply instead of disposing of it properly.
>fluoride stare


>The only reason we treat our tap water with extra fluoride is because the phosphate fertilizer industry produces hexafluorosilicic acid as a by-product and water fluoridation is used as an excuse to just dump it in the water supply instead of disposing of it properly.
Not just that, it has its roots even further back in lobbyists from the nuclear industry working to downplay the toxicity of fluoride exposure against workers. One of the biggest advocates for fluoridation and fluoride safety during the cold war was the lead toxicologist of the Manhattan Project and the same guy who orchestrated the human plutonium experiments where they injected plutonium into people without their consent to observe what happened.


Thanks for the additional information! Im afraid we're somewhat derailing the thread LMAO


I noticed you had pasted something I'd written a while back in a modified form. I was very flattered so I had to add more.



i write in my journal a minimum of 20 minutes. whenever i write over that time, i keep track of it. if i have done this for 3 times in a week, i take the average of that excess and add it more to my minimum writing requirement. i haven't written anything else, but i would like to learn how to write better before i start on some sort of opinion piece.


Hmmm where do you write? I should do something like this but I suck with these habits.


in my room. you can even start at 5 minutes and work your way up. just remember to enjoy it.


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>"The institutional hierarchy of the education systems is a bourgeois fabrication of the ruling class to enforce draconian measures upon the proletariat and control the minds of the youth to mold them into nothing more than cogs in the great machine of capitalism!" Megumin ranted. "The modern education system was created in Prussia in the 18th century to produce-"
Ok, fess up, which of you anons is Full-Paragon? This is the most /leftypol/ thing ever, to literally start repeating a political effortpost (pic 2 related)… fucking kek.



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So, might as well put this fanfiction I made on how could ww3 go:
>Ukraine launches an offensive into the popular republics and Crimea, they advance a little. Ukraine declares war on Russia.
>The Donbass and Luhansk republics welcome the Russian army.
>The Ukrainian army advances into Crimea, but gets stopped. They conquer some, but get boggled down.
>Russia's military is organizing itself hard on this, and mobilizing itself.
>A month happens with people getting killed but no advances aside from light ukrainian advances.
>The west won't participate yet, but will help Ukraine through military support and it will tell through incredible mental gymnastics that Russia attacked first.
>People are not supportive of the war going on, but they won't care because they see it as just a regional war, no one cares.
>There will be some outrage at the west supporting Ukraine but it won't escalate.
>Then Turkey and Azerbaijan, using some shit excuse, attack Armenia to conquer it.
>Russia intervenes and starts invading Azerbaijan.
>Syria and Iran, maybe even Iraq, start attacking Turkey and Azerbaijan, since Turkey occupies parts of Iraq and Syria right now and Iran is fucking tired of it's bullshit.
>Erdogan says: Assad must go!
>Pakistan is big on being a turkey fanboy, and invades Iran.
>India then goes and invades Pakistan because Kashmir and so on.
>Pakistan starts getting beaten by both India and Iran, no nukes used yet, until Pakistan gets between the sword and the wall. Then it launches it's nukes to both Iran and India, although mostly to India. Maybe a nuke makes it to Russia.
>India in response drops all of it's nukes on Pakistan
>Iran is mostly unaffected by this. I mean, its capital has been nuked, but hey, AT LEAST IT'S NOT INDIA.
>India and Pakistan are the first to completely collapse, with warlords coming out of the woods like flies, kinda like post-heydrich germany on TNO.
<"India and pakistan are the first to completely collapse" oh boy just you wait it's gonna be epicly based and posadist-pilled.
>People are fucking horrified as they wake up from the "end of history" dream as the first nuclear apocalypse just happened right now.
>Big ass riots in order to make the war stop right now.
>People get ignored and the media starts making excuses.
>Azerbaijan collapses from both southern and northern pressure as the russian and iranian military enter it's capital. A ton of warcrimes will then be discovered, and this event will be known as the second armenian genocide.
>The turkish front gets bogged down, the advances the turkish made get retaken, but the other armies can't advance as well, getting into a stalemate at the mountains of Anatolia. People die daily on that front but not that much movement is made aside from Turkey attacking again and again and the KPG getting big money from Russia and Iran.
>Turkey, also, after the indian fiasco, starts getting anti-war riots. These riots will be put down by a newly installed nationalist military goverment with Endorgan as it's president. Thousands of people will be incarcerated or killed.
>Turkey starts funding yihadists groups inside of Russia. These groups, aside from making some big incidents inside russia, will spill into other countries such as MENA countries or european ones.
>Meanwhile, Saudi Arabia, knowing Iran had been nuked, gets it's opportunity, and tries to invade Iran.
>Of course, Saudi Arabia fucking embarrases itself and collapses as iranian missiles fuck up it's water and petroleum trade.
<And another one bites the dust.
>Aside from this movement from Saudi Arabia, at Ukraine, Russia organizes a counter-attack. Operation Uranus 2.0 La Verganza. From north the russian army advances and cuts off the ukrainian front at donetsk and luhansk. They conquer pretty much everything east of the Dnieper.
>Tons of ukrainian warcrimes are discovered.
>Aside from that, the Ukrainian army at Crimea safely retreats, but Crimea is on shambles. Sevastopol is now a ghost town.
>The russian army still goes on and cross the Dnieper, and in 3 months or so they're at Kiev.
>This scares the shit off NATO, Ukraine gets into NATO at the last moment, and the whole of NATO declares war on Russia.
>China then invades Taiwan to help it's ally Russia. China enters the world war.
>The NATO army is an unorganized mess. The European front has lots of nationalities put into one big army, Spaniards with Greeks, Germans with Italians, France it's not in NATO so it shouldn't intervene, but it's from the EU so it will intervene. The only people who understand each other are americans and bri'ish people.
>Aside from that, they need to get organized in a moment.
>Bielorrusia joins the battle at the side of Russia (or might not, I don't know).
>Polish troops and baltic troops are the first to arrive.
>Eastern European militaries are plagued by corruption, it's army is pretty much useless aside from european support.
>The front gets into almost WW1 borders, Russia conquers till they reach the border with Germany, The Check Republic, Slovakia and Romania.

>Meanwhile, on the asian front, Japan suddenly starts a conscription service and declares war on China. This is hugely unpopular among the japanese people, and riots start to stop such a law to come to be. Japan then gets it's own military goverment a la Pinochet, and becomes and even bigger client state for the US. This conscription law will separate the country in two.

>Not that it matters, as North Korea conquers South Korea and nukes Japan for thy Lulz.
>This makes the separation inside Japan really fucking big between the anti-war movement and the war movement. The anti-war movement will be financed by China, and it's more radical part will take the leadership, although the Chinese will fund the most moderate part that is still anti-war, meanwhile, the pro-war goverment inside Japan will become a lot more repressive. An unspeaken civil war occurs inside Japan
>The US, alongside Japanese recruits, try to conquer Korea. They get bogged down not by korean troops but by the People's Liberation Army, also known as the chinese army.
<Japan might have a communist revolution.

>Meanwhile, let's talk about the toll that this war has made.

>Firstly, about India and Pakistan.
<India and Pakistan become into warlord territory, and millions upon millions of refugees start getting out of the irradiated mess that is the Indian peninsula.
<The "-stan" countries, like Turkmenistan and so on, COLLAPSE HARD, their goverments can't handle the refugee crisis, and other goverments inside their borders start taking power. The Taliban take hold of all of the region and start their caliphate and reign of terror on their jihad. They won't conquer more than those territories, as they have a lot of other problems to tackle.
<The only country to survive this apocalypse is kazhakstan, as it's choke full of chinese and russian military to stop jihadism.

>Meanwhile, at the south-eastern countries of Asia.

<A similar story, the indian refugees come into those countries and are so much people that their goverments collapse as there is not enough food. Anarchy takes hold of the region, with warlords coming out of the woods like flies.
<The US make it's operational base in Asia the Philippines, Australia, and Japan. Most of the war with China is fought on sea, so there's nothing really important happening there. Aside from that, they try to land on Vietnam to try to make it governable again and conquer China with them, this doesn't go as planned, South China is mountainous, so the fight boggles down.

>Meanwhile, at the world.

<The indian nuclear apocalypse has made a layer of dust through the world, making it get less sunlight.
<At the same time, war is literally the most contaminant activity we humans have deviced, the US army makes more CO2 than 192 countries combined.
<Climate change really kicks in, and the poles don't exist anymore, Cuba is now 3 islands, Florida doesn't exist anymore, the Netherlands is underwater, all of the pacific islands have ceased to exist. Crimea, the land they were fighting for, now literally doesn't exist, but the war, ironically, goes on.
<The layer of dust made by the Indian Nuclear Apocalypse (INA) has made it so crops don't grow because of not having the sufficient light to actually grow, as it has happened times before when a massive volcano literally exploded.
<Also this will make a refugee crisis so hard not till now seen, more extreme than the barbarian migrations during the end of the Roman Empire, shit's about to go down.

>Meanwhile, at the American continent.

<The US probably has made some plans to conquer Venezuela and Cuba
<They enact them.
<People are pissed about it.
<Guerrilla Warfare against US occupation.

>Meanwhile, at Europe.

<Most of the countries in Europe don't fucking want to be at war with Russia aside from the Eastern ones, the most anti-war countries would be Spain and Greece IMO.
<On the case of Spain, as a Spaniard myself, this anti-war movement would be fucking gigantous. We already had an anti-war movement during the Irak war in which we participated in, and our army, compared to the rest of the european armies, although well equipped, is it because of it's adherence to NATO. During late Francoism the spanish military made drills with ww2 junkers and using gasoline caskets with grenades attached to them as bombs. The military in Spain is the most corrupt organization in this country, and getting it purged against Russia would be incredibly funny if it wasn't because they would implement a draft (as in the majority of Europe tbh) to combat Russia. That, alongside the anger against the politicians, the capitalists and the king itself, which is also the commander of troops, kinda like Nicholas the second… I don't have to tell anything more tbh. Spain, being also an enter way into Europe would have problems with refugees and an incredible instability on itself, aside that the country is run by actual monkeys, there would probably be no rationing at all, making the food prices skyrocket till infinity. Everything of that would mix on a revolutionary cocktel from which a communist revolution could arise. A liberal revolution might happen first, with a republic, and then another one, kinda like the russian revolution. Hell, even Felipe VII looks kinda like King Nicholas from Russia.
<Spain might have a communist revolution which would then spread through Europe, maybe Portugal and Greece would have it's own revolutions, and would get out of the war. France is another one which might have a revolution, Italy I don't know, Britain could have one since Britain is already going to shit the bed, even without the whole WW3 happening.
>The US will conquer part of Andalucia through Gibraltar to ensure that it bases there remain loyal.
<On other countries, I don't know how it would go like, please answer this post with your conclusions.
<Either way, the war would boggle down hard, and we would get into a WW1 era of trenches, only now with drones.
<The EU will have to make a separate peace treaty with Russia, which will stand "victorious" (saying much tbh) at the war. The EU will be dismantled and Russia will make client states at Poland and the Baltic states, taking everything else for themselves. The EU is in shambles, but at least it hasn't been nuked to death. The peace treaty was to try to avoid a communist revolution, it will happen either way, or there might be a civil war inside of the EU between communists and the other groups, comprised of "liberals" and literal nazies, from this war, the most likely winner would be the communists, since technically they would have come from the south which had it's factories kinda untouched because of being so far away from Russia.
<Either way, the EU doesn't exist anymore, it's a shell of it's former self, and there's people starving to death on the streets meanwhile a civil war turns really sour.

>The US-Chinese front.

<The last front, this front has done nothing at all, and with Russia out of the european front, and coming to help the chinese, the US will resort to the last tactic possible.
<Red Telephone Incident (RTI) of 05/12/2024
<Russia, China and the US enter a mad max radiation periode, alongside japan, Australia and the Philippines.

>The aftermath.

<The only places that continues to kinda exist is some countries of South America and communist Europe, but they will enter a long, looooooooooong dark age of maybe two centuries or so.

So yea, what do you think of this Fanfiction I've just made?
Wanna add anything to it?
Or make your own?


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The Bavarian uprising fails to be quashed by the Freikorps, more German communists flock to the new soviet republic and defenses are fortified just long enough for the USSR to supply them with arms. The other German states, tired from war, back off after a few months after more communist revolutions break out in German cities. The Nazi party never takes off as a result and the anger that Hitler exploited so well is exploited by the communists instead. Rather than blame the jews, they blame the actual reason the war was lost/so many Germans died: the generals and nobility.

Socialist Republic of Cuxhaven
there where some more but i don't remember all

btw. Liebknecht proclaimed the Free Socialist Republic of Germany at the 09. November 1918 vid and picrel


how do I make a piece of shit character likeable?


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In the case of a villain/antagonist, pull a Nagato: The character of Pain is stated in series to have slaughtered Hanzo and his entire family and all associates down to every last babe. In-story he also kills Jiraiya, making it personal… and then in the final battle he reveals that he too suffered like this, and that his actions are just as justified as any other revenge, that he decided that peace cannot be achieved if you cannot bring pain to others. Naruto, having beaten Pain narrowly finally finds the things he needs to say and turns Nagato around, and the man redeems himself in death (a common theme in Naruto for that matter - Zabuza, Obito etc.).
So yeah, give your characters a compelling and sympathetic backstory (don't just exposition dump though).

Also to make them likeable assholes I also suggest quirky behaviors and them doing good things, even if grudgingly. Another example could be Darth Vader or Assaj Ventress.

For a more normal story setting I really suggest observing th Character of Berlin from Casa De Papel, see >>6635


To bring up the topic of strong female characters, video related is a good explanation as to the reasons most modern films fail to create actually strong female leads and just create toxic caricatures.

To the part about "men being the evil behind the female villain" I'd like to add the fact that historically it's been the reverse; the power behind the throne usually referred to the royal/noble women of the court and their machinations and manipulations of men.

TL;DR: Being antifeminine =/= progressive and pro-women
Being anti-feminine is just toxic masculinity but by girls.


some people think "women's equality to men" means women should be just like men, rather than, you know, equal as citizens or something to that effect


>some people
a lot of people (mostly liberals) think in this manner.


Speaking of Alt History - Tintin is a great example of this, video related; The Adventures of Tintin and the Shadows of Giants

Also as an aside, I loved the Tintin animated movie and am so disappointed that it's so forgotten by people.


The Tintin movie was neat, but it didn't do anything amazing and wasn't adapting a hugely popular (in the US) property so there wasn't anything to draw people to it. Struck an interesting balance in making the comic designs more realistic.


How exactly does one "get gud" at writing? For my other hobbies (guitar and boxing) it's easy to improve and see measurable results because I go to classes and have teachers who give me things to work on and tell me if I'm making progress or not. I don't think a comparable situation is available for writing, though. The only place where I get feedback is work, where I do technical writing. But the type of writing I do professionally is very different than what I would actually like to write (and it's mostly copy and pasting anyway).


>but it didn't do anything amazing
The CGI is fucking amazing and the story is a classical adventure that I haven't seen in ages in animated media, I thought it was pretty great.

>I don't think a comparable situation is available for writing, though
There is talent involved but the main thing is just practice, same as anything else. Read the thread for some advise given to others.
>the type of writing I do professionally is very different than what I would actually like to write
Don't do literature like a textbook, essay or philosophical text (a la Das Kapital) that's a surefire method of killing your story and making it a bland mess. I suggest you start off by doing fanfiction (no need to necessarily publish it if you don't feel like it) and use an established world to create something. From there you can start to make original things.


Accidentally stumbled onto a FFN account called AlexanderMugetsu during a writefaggeneral thread and it's just one-shot after oneshot of Human x Pokemon beastiality. The sheer dedication is kind of aweing. The fact that this shit isn't badly written is the most surprising thing TBH.


Popping in to say I've been reading fanfic for over a decade. Can't write worth a damn myself, but hugely appreciate that shit. Never for a moment think your writing isn't appreciated. As long as you are sincere, the explicit quality of your writing is secondary.
Keep at it, I believe in you!


Thanks anon


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>Want to get into writing
>Want to write original works (maybe smut too)
>Never created a character before


Just base the characters off of fictional characters you like, that's what everyone else does.


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Unironically create a /tg/ character




>>21632 (me)
I base all of my characters off of this series in honor of bowl cut guy or whatever his name is


I miss Trevor ;_;


>Want to get into writing
>Can only create characters
>Can't write for shit


Do you happen to know any free software that makes writing fiction easier and more organized?


I don't know if this counts because it has a "Pro" version, but I used to use The Gamebook Authoring Tool to plan VN plots. (Nowadays I just make a flowchart)


>The CGI is fucking amazing and the story is a classical adventure that I haven't seen in ages in animated media, I thought it was pretty great.
It's amazing to people who actually understand the problems that it tackled and solved with is under 1% of movie audiences. I can and did appreciate it but most people won't. I agree it is probably one of the great adventure films and film adaptations of some other medium.


I'll look into this tool, looks interesting.


>most people won't
Huh, you make a good point, I guess I kind of assumed people could see that but I guess I overestimate them.


word document 2010. You can CTRL+F any part of the story and just split each chapter into seperate documents. It also allows for highlighting and footnotes for yourself.


Books or Screenplays?


Any recommendations?


In what context? As reading material, the former.


Just try, try and try again.


>Gamer fics
The recent Donghua WN "The Gamer" has made the genre really popular in fanfiction at the time of this post, and by god are they garbage - fucking insipid, uninspired powerfantasies of the most sickening people that crave to do horrifying things and justify it in some retarded way.


>spend 2 years writing book partly about stormfags in Ukraine 2014
>now they're the good guys


>now they're the good guys
Fucking how?


sell it to the russian government, might as well get a return on the effort you did on their behalf


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alright faggots, we did our best to bring back your loli van, bad news is, she's not a van anymore.
say something nice to her.


idk man sounds like r/collaspe the story.


lol lovie


She's new and improved


Have you ever read a fanfiction and really liked it, thought it was great and faved it, only to come back to it years later and realize that it's pretty poorly written?


I have not come back to any of the MLP fanfictions I used to read, but it is safe to assume that 99% of them are objectively garbage.


Lol yeah, probably. I recently read a couple fanfics from the Naruto and AvP franchises I liked and man, I mean the latter was not horrific conceptually, but the execution is much more childish than I thought it had been years ago.



does anyone know any good places where ppl give advice on actual writing, like other places or places with advice?


A good source is youtube and some small reddit communities that aren't flooded by liberals and idiots. Terrible Writing Advice is a kinda sarcastic youtube channel that does all sorts of writing advice in a fun and understandable manner, so you can take a look at that. There's more ITT about these kinds of things.




They got spammed by bots and haters.


so, when is leftypol gonna move their creative juices and write some fanfiction ?.


There's a familiar of zero fanfic that has her summon Che Guevara. And a funny HP fanfic that has Harry go full Stalin mode.

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